- Revision Project (Extra Credit) Due Monday December 12th- You can revise one of your Project 1 or Project 2 papers for a higher score. That means one of your two narratives or one of your two analysis papers. There are two catches:
- The revised paper must have 50% new material. This can come in the form of expanding the narrative longer or reworking large sections of the paper or a combination of both.
- You can only revise a paper that you actually completed. So if you did not submit a narrative or an analysis paper you cannot revise that project.
- Logical Fallacy Assignment (Extra Credit) Due Friday December 9th You can repeat he Logical Fallacy Assignment 5 more times to receive 30 extra credit points The first one you do will be worth 10. The other 4 are worth 5. You will receive points based on how accurately you identify the Logical Fallacies
- First Draft of Research Paper(MANDATORY) Due Friday December 2nd- You will be submitting this via Google Docs and ELI Review. I want you to break your paper into 3 sections about 1.5 to 2 pages long each. If your piece is longer than 6 pages you will be allowed to have more pages in each section. You can mark them Part 1, Part 2, etc or you can give them actual subtitles like The Dangers of Smoking or How to Quit just break your paper up.(We'll discuss next class exactly how subtitles should be formatted) In Google Docs highlight the section you want me to review for you. You will also be submitting each part into ELI separately.
- Genre Project (MANDATORY) Due Tuesday December 6th- Bring in 3 examples of the genre we agreed upon for your 2nd Persuasive Genre. See Genres of Writing for ideas. GENRE MUST BE APPROVED BY ME.
- Genre Project (Continued) (MANDATORY) Due Thursday December 8th-Bring in the example of the genre that YOU created.
- Final Draft of Research Paper(MANDATORY) Due Friday December 16th
Friday, December 2, 2016
Course Recap for Thursday, December 1, 2016
End of the Semester Assignment List
Tuesday, November 29, 2016
Course Recap for Tuesday, November 29, 2016
First Draft of Research Paper
Make sure that your draft attempts to do the following things:
- Prove your community has a problem. What is the issue? Why should people care? Where's the proof that this is happening in your community?
- Provides solutions. What can we do to fix this issue? How do we know this solution will work? Is there any research to back up the effectiveness of the solution? Remember for those of you exploring issues that deal with issues of public policy and law to give at least one solution that YOU as a member of your community could do to help the issue. Let's say your issue is poor sex education in the school system. Getting a better curriculum implemented in the schools is a solution but what can the students do to help the issue. Maybe they could form some sort of anonymous online group where students can safely ask questions and receive answers from professionals. We want to call everyone in your community to action on this issue not just the people in charge.
- What are the counterarguments? What are the potential obstacles that could prevent you from implementing your solutions? What reasons might people give for why your issue shouldn't be addressed? Looking again at poor sex education, you might have people who argue that the current curriculum is fine or that the curriculum you are proposing will promote promiscuity. How can you handle these objections? This does not necessarily have to be a section of its own. Many of you will address these issues when you answer questions 1 and 2 but you want to keep it in mind as you write.
- Try and have at least one source for each of the 3 questions above. What tends to happen with this paper is people pack all of their sources in one section of the paper (usually the one addressing the problems). If your solution is to form a smoking support group, find a source that talks about the effectiveness of support groups. If the issue is the wrestling team is underfunded, what are the benefits of funding the wrestling team? What does being on the wrestling team do for students?
Second Genre
While I want your research paper to be the main focus over the next couple of days, it is time for you to think about your secondary genre. Your secondary genre piece's goal is to complement your research paper. It's purpose is to help your audience see your issue through a different form of writing. Under Class Documents there is a list of Genres of Writing. Look it over and think about what other genre of writing best fits your topic and will help you further prove your point. Your genre might focus primarily on illustrating the problem, for instance, a powerful magazine ad that talks about the effects of domestic violence or a play that illustrates gender fluidity, a poem expressing what it's like to have anxiety and depression as a college student, or it might look at the solution: greeting cards to give to students who are suffering from homesickness, a month long menu of healthier cafeteria options, an illustrated how-to guide on proper running form. All the examples, I gave are things students have done in the past. Come to class Thursday with some ideas of what you want to do that you can bounce off of me.
Homework
- Read Letter from Birmingham Jail page 121 in Readings for Writers Due Thursday December 1
- Think about what second genre you want to do. Due Thursday December 1
- First Draft of Research Paper Due Friday December 2 via Google Docs and ELI Review
Friday, November 18, 2016
Course Recap for Thursday, November 17, 2016
Annotated Bibliography
You are creating an annotated bibliography of 10 sources. For each source you will include an APA reference entry and then an annotation, a paragraph where you summarize and evaluate the source. Check the example below.
You are creating an annotated bibliography of 10 sources. For each source you will include an APA reference entry and then an annotation, a paragraph where you summarize and evaluate the source. Check the example below.
Burden of tobacco use in the U.S. (2016, May 20). Centers for Disease Control and
Prevention. Retrieved from
ited-states.html?gclid=Cj0KEQiAx7XBBRCdyNOw6PLHrYABEiQAJtyEQ-HLy
eWOIcGYnGqQelBcqGp5wEY6l2GxA5nctMaJ40YaAttP8P8HAQ
This site provides statistics about smoking. It talks about the prevalence of smoking amongst different demographics and the number of deaths caused by smoking. This article helps to show that smoking affects a large number of people from many different backgrounds. It also shows how many are negatively affected by smoking, providing statistics that show the number of smoker who have developed and/or died from smoking-related illnesses like lung cancer or emphysema. A large number of people who are killed by smoking aren't even smokers "...with more than 41,000 of these deaths from exposure to secondhand smoke" ("Burden of Tobacco," 2016). According to “Burden of Tobacco Use in the US” (2016) There is a higher rate of smoking (26.3%) in people below the poverty line than those above it.
You are going to do this for 10 different sources. Here are some tips for creating a good annotated bibliography.
- Start your search with the WMU library website. You have to have 2 scholarly articles but it won't hurt to have a few more. Once you've exhausted this resource, check out Google. This is a good way to ensure that the majority of your sources are valid.
- Check out the questions on page 37 of your EasyWriter book under the Analysis section to determine what types of things you should discuss in your annotation.
- Use your annotation to help yourself gather all of that source's useful information in one spot. Include any useful quotes or statistics so that you don't have to go searching for them later.
- Make sure when you quote from a source that you use proper APA formatting.
- If you use a citation creator like EasyBib or KnightCite, make sure that what that site generates is the same as the formatting provided in the APA Formatting Guide I created or the APA Formatting Guide located in your Easy Writer book (starts on pg 263).
- If at anytime you feel confused, referring to your EasyWriter book about APA formatting will be really helpful. It's what I use to determine how to format sources in APA. It has a very detailed guide on APA from how to quote sources to how they should appear on your reference page. If you weren't here, or if you forgot what I taught on Thursday or if you find my guide a bit confusing (I added a lot of notes in there), this could be the next best route.
- Please put in effort. I will know when you haven't done so and you will be graded accordingly.
Homework
- Create the annotations (description of sources) for the two sources we added to your bibliography on Thursday. (Due Sunday Nov 20 at midnight via Google Docs)
- Completed Annotated Bibiliography (Due Tuesday Nov 22 at midnight via Google Docs)
- Enjoy your break!!!
The formatting of this post is wonky because I was trying to show you how to format the bibliography. It should still be easy to read though.
Wednesday, November 2, 2016
Course Recap for Tuesday, November 1, 2016
Conferences are over, and I hope that they were helpful. This Tuesday we had peer review. I hope that peer review gives you all a good idea of what I will be looking for in your final drafts. The place where many of you lost points in the first project was your failure to actually revise your papers. Please use the feedback your classmates gave you to help you make actual changes to your paper (correcting grammatical errors are a good start but I also want revision in your content). If you feel like you didn't receive good feedback from your classmates, look over the peer review sheet and ask yourself if you're missing any of the things mentioned there. Maybe you don't need to include historical context to make your point, but you know it would make your analysis stronger. Revision isn't just about fixing what's wrong. It's about taking what you have and making it better. There is no such thing as a perfect paper.
Also I'm including in the Class Documents the Works Cited Page we worked on together in class to help you when formatting your Works Cited Page. It includes the entries for the 3 short stories.
Homework
- Analysis Paper #2 via ELI Review and Google Docs Thurs Nov 3 11:45pm
- Peer Review of Analysis Paper #2 in ELI Review Due Sunday Nov 6 11:45pm
- Final Draft of BOTH Analysis Papers Due Friday Nov 11th 11:45pm
Thursday, October 13, 2016
Course Recap for Thursday, October 13, 2016
Song Analysis
We analyzed a few songs together. We looked at how the lyrics, the music, the time period the song was written, the background of the artist, etc all can be used to help us determine the meaning of the song. The two things I want you to keep in mind as you choose your own songs is the fact that a set of lyrics can mean different things to different people depending on who's listening and to pick songs where some of the lyrics are up for interpretation.
Homework
We analyzed a few songs together. We looked at how the lyrics, the music, the time period the song was written, the background of the artist, etc all can be used to help us determine the meaning of the song. The two things I want you to keep in mind as you choose your own songs is the fact that a set of lyrics can mean different things to different people depending on who's listening and to pick songs where some of the lyrics are up for interpretation.
Homework
- Outline for Movie of your choice. Check out the Sample Analysis Outline. Due Tues 10/18 in class
- Read Sonny's Blues (underneath Class Documents) Due Tues 10/18 in class
- Outline for Song of your choice Due Thurs 10/20 in class
- Read The All-Girl Football Team and Virgins Due Thurs 10/20 in class
Tuesday, October 11, 2016
Course Recap for Tuesday, October 11, 2016
How to Determine a Good Thesis
Your thesis is the most important part of your paper. It gives your paper structure. Determining what the thesis of your analysis paper is will help you determine what details from the piece you should include in your paper and which ones to exclude. I had you guys answer several questions about the movies you are thinking of analyzing.
Your thesis is the most important part of your paper. It gives your paper structure. Determining what the thesis of your analysis paper is will help you determine what details from the piece you should include in your paper and which ones to exclude. I had you guys answer several questions about the movies you are thinking of analyzing.
- What are the larger issues or topics your piece talks about? For Carrie this would include bullying, religion, abuse, sexuality, high school, etc. Then I asked you to ask what you feel the piece says about those topics? For Carrie I could say that the piece talks about how bullying can turn people into monsters or that sexuality especially in women is a bad thing. These would be potential theses for an analysis of Carrie.
- Next I asked you to consider the type of conflict you have. There are 5 archetypal conflicts that are usually present in most stories. Man vs Man, Man vs Self, Man vs Nature, Man vs Technology, Man vs Society. Determine which of the conflicts you have. Then think about who wins the conflict and why, what does that say about that thing? For instance, nature wins in Titanic, why? Because humans underestimated it. They thought they built something indestructible but nothing is indestructible. Or in Carrie we have man vs man and everyone loses, why? Maybe because everyone who refuses to stand up to bullying is just as complicit as the bullies and so everyone suffers in the end.
- Next think about how the societal descriptors like race, class, gender, sexuality for the characters in your movie and how they may affect your character and the piece. In Carrie, Carrie's religious background and her gender has an effect on the piece. A potential theme could be how these things affect her.
- How does the history surrounding the piece affect your interpretation of it? What real life events might the piece be influenced by? The feminist movement was hitting it's stride in the 70s when Carrie was released, and so it is pretty significant that de Palma made a movie with a mostly-female cast where just about every woman is crazy.
- Know your director. Know who they are and know some of their other work. Sometimes a good way to find a theme is to spot the reoccurring images or themes throughout their body of work. If nothing else, this information can provide you with good background info that you can use to support whatever your thesis is.
Thursday, October 6, 2016
Course Recap for Thursday, October 6, 2016
Analysis of Carrie
When analyzing a piece, one of the things that helps us establish the message is examining the patterns that we see in the piece. What things do we see being repeated over and over and what do those things mean? What message is being sent intentionally or unintentionally by the repetition of these images and ideas?
In a movie, another thing to pay attention to is who in the movie is successful and who in the movie fails. What is the difference between those who get what they want and those who don't?
Homework
When analyzing a piece, one of the things that helps us establish the message is examining the patterns that we see in the piece. What things do we see being repeated over and over and what do those things mean? What message is being sent intentionally or unintentionally by the repetition of these images and ideas?
In a movie, another thing to pay attention to is who in the movie is successful and who in the movie fails. What is the difference between those who get what they want and those who don't?
Homework
- Read Cult Movie Review: Carrie by John Kenneth Muir and Horror, Femininity, and Carrie's Monstrous Puberty by Shelley Stamp Lindsey. As you're reading these articles, take notes on the different themes these writers saw in the movie Carrie. What did they feel the movie had to say about the world, about high school, about womanhood, and any other topics the movie addresses? Also make note of what things from the movie they believe help illustrate these themes. (The Horror, Femininity, and Carrie's Puberty is a VERY dense piece. Please give yourself enough time to parse through it. The intro in particular can be a bit hard to understand but it becomes less so as you continue. Do not give up. Summarize it the best that you can.) Due Tuesday October 11 in class
- If you could analyze two movies for your next paper, which movies would they be? Have them in mind when you come to class Tuesday.
Tuesday, October 4, 2016
Course Recap for Tuesday, October 4, 2016
Grammar
At the beginning of class, we went over a few grammatical rules. You can find further information about these rules in your EasyWriter book. Here however are a few quick and easy things to keep in mind.
At the beginning of class, we went over a few grammatical rules. You can find further information about these rules in your EasyWriter book. Here however are a few quick and easy things to keep in mind.
- Whatever tense you start your paper in (past, present, or future), you need to stay in that tense. Check your verbs and make sure you are consistent.
- Whenever you start a sentence with an -ing verb, a subordinating conjunction (because, before, after, when, since, etc), or prepositions (in, on, over, under, etc), you'll need a comma.
- Avoid starting sentences with FANBOYS (For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So)
- If there is a complete sentence on either side of a FANBOY, you need a comma.
- Semicolons separate complete sentences only.
- Indent first lines of paragraphs.
- Make sure your paper is formatted correctly.
We also started the movie Carrie which we will be completing on Thursday and discussing as we head into the second project
Homework
- Review the following pages in your EasyWriter if you know you need a brush-up on certain grammatical issues. Sentence Fragments: pg 90-92, Comma Splices and Fused Sentences: pg 87-89, Commas pg 110-118, Semicolons pg 119-120, and Tense Shifts pg 105
- Extra Credit: Go to bedfordstmartins.com/easy and use the access code in your EasyWriter book to access an instructorless course. Do the Exercises and Learning Curve Adaptive Quizzes that correspond with one or more of the above issues (Commas, Tense Shifts, etc) Record your answers to the questions on a sheet of paper or on a Google Doc. Due Thursday Oct 6 in class
- Continue revising your narratives. Final Drafts of Both Narratives Due Thursday Oct 6 by the time class starts. (If you are going to take your paper to The Writing Center you need to make your appointment before class time on Thursday.)
Friday, September 30, 2016
Course Recap for Thursday September 29, 2016
Revision
We did peer review today in class. You received feedback from two students on one paper, and one student on the other. I will also be giving you feedback over the weekend. You should receive feedback from me by Monday night.
Your task now is to revise your two papers using both the feedback you received and your own intuition as a writer. There is always some aspect of our piece that can be improved. Revision is more than just going in and correcting grammatical mistakes. It means re(en)visioning certain aspects of your piece to shed new light on the topic and improve the quality of the piece. Rewriting a short passage for clarity or adding details to a description, adding a section of dialogue to better illustrate a scene, these are examples of revision. Taking away from a piece can also count as revision. Maybe you have too much information in some places. If your original draft is 750 words, I will not mind if your final draft is a bit shorter if the sections you eliminate help to improve your narrative.
Some technical aspects you want to make sure you don't forget:
We did peer review today in class. You received feedback from two students on one paper, and one student on the other. I will also be giving you feedback over the weekend. You should receive feedback from me by Monday night.
Your task now is to revise your two papers using both the feedback you received and your own intuition as a writer. There is always some aspect of our piece that can be improved. Revision is more than just going in and correcting grammatical mistakes. It means re(en)visioning certain aspects of your piece to shed new light on the topic and improve the quality of the piece. Rewriting a short passage for clarity or adding details to a description, adding a section of dialogue to better illustrate a scene, these are examples of revision. Taking away from a piece can also count as revision. Maybe you have too much information in some places. If your original draft is 750 words, I will not mind if your final draft is a bit shorter if the sections you eliminate help to improve your narrative.
Some technical aspects you want to make sure you don't forget:
- Make your changes directly in the original Google document you shared with me. This will allow me to track your changes and see just how much (or how little) you have revised.
- Make sure you are formatted correctly, double-spaced, 12 point font, MLA Header, with MLA running head.
- Give your piece an actual title (not just personal narrative).
- Make sure you have five lines of standard dialogue in both narratives. Please review Hills Like White Elephants if you need a refresher on how dialogue should be formatted.
Homework
- Work on revising your Narratives. Final Drafts are due Thursday, October 6 (at the beginning of class) Any papers submitted after 4:15 will be considered late.
Tuesday, September 27, 2016
Course Recap for Tuesday, September 27, 2016
Review and Revision
Today we went over tips for reviewing the works of our classmates and we went over creating a revision plan. I went over the feedback that you all received from your classmates in ELI and pointed out ways everyone can improve when providing commentary on our classmates's pieces. Here are the highlights:
Today we went over tips for reviewing the works of our classmates and we went over creating a revision plan. I went over the feedback that you all received from your classmates in ELI and pointed out ways everyone can improve when providing commentary on our classmates's pieces. Here are the highlights:
- Be specific. Explain why you feel something does or does not work. This sort of information gives the writer something to work with. If you let them know that you like a passage because of the level of detail, they know they need to continue using details throughout their piece. If you say you don't like a passage because it's lacking detail, they know they need to add detail to the piece.
- Provide constructive criticism even to the pieces you like. If you're having a hard time finding something they could improve upon, start asking yourself what do I want to see more of. Maybe they introduced an interesting character and you'd like to see more of him or you'd like to see a specific event. It's not that the piece is lacking information about these topics. It's that these topics are the ones you found the most interesting, and therefore, could be places where added detail would enhance the story.
- Cite specific moments and passages as often as you can. Giving them examples of sentences you found clunky, or diction you found inspiring, or characters that were interesting, or places where there is no conflict are more helpful than general comments. There's a difference between saying your language is generic and pointing out specific phrases you found cliche. When you do this you help to make sure that you and the writer are working with the same vocabulary and that you're looking at the same thing. That's why the highlight function (when available) is so useful in ELI.
Homework
- Complete Revision Plan of One Page Description of Person/Place (due tonight 11:45pm) in ELI
- Extra Credit: Complete Revision Plan of Dialogue (due tonight 11:45pm) in ELI
- First Drafts of both Narratives (due Thursday 9/29 in class) Print 2 copies of each and also submit to instructor via Google Docs.
Thursday, September 22, 2016
Course Recap for Thursday, September 22, 2016
Theme/Thesis
What do you want to say to the world with your story? That is the thesis of your piece and should be your guide as you write. Try and answer this question: If people do nothing else they should come away from my piece thinking/feeling/believing/wanting....what?
Stories can help us illuminate the things we find important in life. We can increase the empathy people have for one another. We can use that empathy to change minds and behaviors. We can make others feel less alone. I know that the narrative assignment can sometimes feel like a fluff piece for some, but being able to tell a story that teaches a lesson, or reveals an important part of your identity, is an important skill to have.
In "Mother Tongue" Amy Tan aims to change the way we think about "broken" English and those who speak it. There is so much importance placed on "proper" English that we fail to understand the things we can learn from other ways of speaking English. She actually uses storytelling to start a conversation about a bigger issue.
Sherman Alexie does the same with his narrative. He uses his life experiences to show how people stereotype him because he is Indian and the effects of those stereotypes. He explores what it's like to be a member of both worlds, Indian and American, and how Indian life is American life, just an aspect of it that is rarely explored in literature and other forms of media.
What bigger issues do some of your life experiences speak to? How have your experiences shaped the way you see the world? The way you see yourselves? The way your fictional characters see themselves?
As you write, please be mindful about stereotypes and assumptions. Don't assume that everyone is going to see the world through the same lense that you see it. Help them to understand where you and your characters are coming from. BE SPECIFIC. SHOW DON'T TELL.
Here is a video about the dangers of stereotyping and a "single story."
What do you want to say to the world with your story? That is the thesis of your piece and should be your guide as you write. Try and answer this question: If people do nothing else they should come away from my piece thinking/feeling/believing/wanting....what?
Stories can help us illuminate the things we find important in life. We can increase the empathy people have for one another. We can use that empathy to change minds and behaviors. We can make others feel less alone. I know that the narrative assignment can sometimes feel like a fluff piece for some, but being able to tell a story that teaches a lesson, or reveals an important part of your identity, is an important skill to have.
In "Mother Tongue" Amy Tan aims to change the way we think about "broken" English and those who speak it. There is so much importance placed on "proper" English that we fail to understand the things we can learn from other ways of speaking English. She actually uses storytelling to start a conversation about a bigger issue.
Sherman Alexie does the same with his narrative. He uses his life experiences to show how people stereotype him because he is Indian and the effects of those stereotypes. He explores what it's like to be a member of both worlds, Indian and American, and how Indian life is American life, just an aspect of it that is rarely explored in literature and other forms of media.
What bigger issues do some of your life experiences speak to? How have your experiences shaped the way you see the world? The way you see yourselves? The way your fictional characters see themselves?
As you write, please be mindful about stereotypes and assumptions. Don't assume that everyone is going to see the world through the same lense that you see it. Help them to understand where you and your characters are coming from. BE SPECIFIC. SHOW DON'T TELL.
Here is a video about the dangers of stereotyping and a "single story."
Make sure you don't depend on generalizations to carry your story. All college students do this. All girls do that. Specificity is what makes our stories interesting.
Homework
- Character/Setting Description Review via ELI Review (due Friday 9/23 at 11:45pm)
- Read one of the student essays between pages 64-88 in Readings for Writers. Write down what you like about the essay and things you would improve. (due Tuesday 9/27 in class)
- First Drafts of Narratives (due Thursday 9/29 in class) Please review the Narrative Assignment Sheet for requirements.
Tuesday, September 20, 2016
Course Recap for Tuesday, September 20, 2016
The Power of Dialogue
Today we looked at Hills Like White Elephants and looked at the different ways we can convey different information via dialogue. Dialogue is a great way to practice showing and not telling and a great way to start a specific scene in your narrative. Presenting the words that people actually say allows us to provide our narrative with a higher level of specificity. We can reveal things like character, setting, the conflict, the relationship between two characters, the mood of the piece, time period, background, etc.
Conflict
A story isn't a story without conflict. A character overcoming an obstacle is what drives a story. Again think about our activity in class as you write. Remember how you had to use different tactics to attempt to get what you want. Remember that you weren't given what you wanted easily. You want to show your character working hard for what they want. Also if it's another person preventing you (or your main character) from getting what you want, try and provide them with a reason while they're doing so (remember how your classmate always denied you for a reason). This keeps us from having flat stereotypical villains.
Homework
- One Page Dialogue via ELI Review (due Thursday 9/22 at 11:45pm) You can use your dialogue to either further your personal narrative that you started over the weekend or you can use it to start your fictional narrative.
- Read "Mother Tongue" by Amy Tan, pg. 8 Readings for Writer (due Thursday 9/22 in class)
- Review The Unauthorized Autobiography of Me by Sherman Alexie for discussion in class. To get a jump start on our discussion, review the story and be prepared to tell me what theme connects the various different events that Alexie talks about in his piece. (due Thursday 9/22)
- Do the Review Task- Character/Setting Description Review via ELI Review (due Friday 9/23 at 11:45pm)
Thursday, September 15, 2016
Course Recap for Thursday, September 15, 2016
Setting
We looked at setting in Face by Alice Munro and the techniques she uses to establish the setting of the piece. She doesn't directly tell us it's a mostly white, upper-class town with traditional values, but we can gain that from her descriptions of the people there and their customs. She shows us the difference between the cottage and the main house not only through physical description but also by describing the various activities that occur in each place and the feelings that are present in the characters when they are in each dwelling. I also wanted us to see how a place that may seem ordinary to others (the old shed that used to be a cottage in a backyard) but can have great significance for others and the story of how that place became significant to you could be a great jumping off point for your narrative.
The main lesson of this week is SHOW not tell. How can you show what's it like for you (or your character) to grow up in your neighborhood? How can you show how great or how awful of a person a character is? What moments can you provide us that illustrate your point so you can keep your readers engaged in your story?
Homework
We looked at setting in Face by Alice Munro and the techniques she uses to establish the setting of the piece. She doesn't directly tell us it's a mostly white, upper-class town with traditional values, but we can gain that from her descriptions of the people there and their customs. She shows us the difference between the cottage and the main house not only through physical description but also by describing the various activities that occur in each place and the feelings that are present in the characters when they are in each dwelling. I also wanted us to see how a place that may seem ordinary to others (the old shed that used to be a cottage in a backyard) but can have great significance for others and the story of how that place became significant to you could be a great jumping off point for your narrative.
The main lesson of this week is SHOW not tell. How can you show what's it like for you (or your character) to grow up in your neighborhood? How can you show how great or how awful of a person a character is? What moments can you provide us that illustrate your point so you can keep your readers engaged in your story?
Homework
- One Page Description of a Person or Place that has been very Influential to You (Due Tuesday 9/20) via ELI Review (if you missed today please email me for the class code so you can get setup in ELI)
- Read Hills Like White Elephants by Ernest Hemingway underneath Class Documents (Due Tuesday 9/20)
- Read The Unauthorized Autobiography of Me by Sherman Alexie underneath Class Documents (Due Tuesday 9/20)
- If you missed today, you want to read over the Narrative Assignment Sheet. There you will see the requirements for your first major papers.
Here is a helpful link for those of you who may need help getting setup on ELI or who are having trouble submitting your one page description on ELI. Also remember I am always available via email. http://elireview.com/learn/tutorials/students/
Tuesday, September 13, 2016
Course Recap for Tuesday, September 13, 2016
Characterization and Voice
In class we looked at two different stories and explored how the writers created and developed interesting characters. In "Me Talk Pretty One Day" specifically we looked at how the narrator revealed aspects of his personality through the voice he uses to tell the story (a very light-hearted, sarcastic tone). The same thing happens in "The Lesson." Sylvia's tone of voice is very hard, aggressive, full of bravado, a voice, we as readers realize she is using as a front to hide her feelings of shame and vulnerability. Also in both The Lesson and Me Talk Pretty One Day, we are able to learn things about the narrators based on how they interact with others. Because we see David cower underneath his teachers scrutiny, we know he is sensitive to criticism but we also know he doesn't give up easily because he continues to work even though the teacher makes him feel so insecure. We know Sylvia is a bully not because she tells us so but because of the way she interacts with her cousin Sugar. Also keep in mind the ways that Bambara is able to quickly introduce and characterize a huge cast of characters in The Lesson, through what they do and what they say.
We did an exercise today where I had you write all of the things in your bedroom and then had your classmates try and guess things about you based on the contents. The point of this exercise is for us to practice showing who a person is instead of just telling the reader who they are.
Homework
In class we looked at two different stories and explored how the writers created and developed interesting characters. In "Me Talk Pretty One Day" specifically we looked at how the narrator revealed aspects of his personality through the voice he uses to tell the story (a very light-hearted, sarcastic tone). The same thing happens in "The Lesson." Sylvia's tone of voice is very hard, aggressive, full of bravado, a voice, we as readers realize she is using as a front to hide her feelings of shame and vulnerability. Also in both The Lesson and Me Talk Pretty One Day, we are able to learn things about the narrators based on how they interact with others. Because we see David cower underneath his teachers scrutiny, we know he is sensitive to criticism but we also know he doesn't give up easily because he continues to work even though the teacher makes him feel so insecure. We know Sylvia is a bully not because she tells us so but because of the way she interacts with her cousin Sugar. Also keep in mind the ways that Bambara is able to quickly introduce and characterize a huge cast of characters in The Lesson, through what they do and what they say.
We did an exercise today where I had you write all of the things in your bedroom and then had your classmates try and guess things about you based on the contents. The point of this exercise is for us to practice showing who a person is instead of just telling the reader who they are.
Homework
- Write a paragraph (7 sentences minimum) describing a person (real or fictional) through an object they love. Think about things you love or about the things we learned about each other from a description of their rooms. Ex. Kelly's stuffed rabbit has a special place on the shelf in her room. Her mom gave it to her when rabbits were her favorite animals. It's missing an arm from when her big brother cut it off after she got him in trouble for smoking. She doesn't like to admit that she still sleeps with him when she's afraid.....
- Read Face by Alice Munro underneath Class Documents (to the right).
Here is a video of David Sedaris reading another essay from his book, Me Talk Pretty One Day, titled "Jesus Shaves."
Thursday, September 8, 2016
Course Recap for Thursday, September 8, 2016
Rhetorical Situations
Today we discussed the elements of rhetorical situations. A rhetorical situation is any set of circumstances that involves at least one person attempting to communicate information with another person (including a future self). Every rhetorical situation involves the following elements:
Today we discussed the elements of rhetorical situations. A rhetorical situation is any set of circumstances that involves at least one person attempting to communicate information with another person (including a future self). Every rhetorical situation involves the following elements:
- Purpose
- Audience
- Medium
- Design
- Context
For more information, check out The Norton Field Guide's take on Rhetorical Situations. These elements help us determine the rules for how we should communicate our message in any given situation.
We then examined these elements in the communications we frequently share on a regular basis in groups. For every piece you write in this class (or every piece you write ever truthfully), you will have to take into consideration the above elements. We examined these elements in blogs on our favorite subjects, which should give us some ideas on how we want to write our own blogs for this class.
We then examined these elements in the communications we frequently share on a regular basis in groups. For every piece you write in this class (or every piece you write ever truthfully), you will have to take into consideration the above elements. We examined these elements in blogs on our favorite subjects, which should give us some ideas on how we want to write our own blogs for this class.
Homework
- Write your first blog post. Since it is your first post, you might want to introduce yourself and let your readers know what they can expect from your blog. Check the Blog Assignment Sheet for more information. Due Friday, Sept. 10 by midnight. (Don't worry about commenting on others blogs. We will discuss it more in Tuesday's class.)
- Read "Me Talk Pretty One Day" by David Sedaris (page 14) and "The Lesson" by Toni Cade Bambara (page 28) from Readings for Writers. Due Tuesday Sept. 13 in class
- Heads Up: Read Face by Alice Munro (posted underneath Class Documents) for Thursday Sept. 15 in class (it's a bit longer than the other two pieces, so you might want to get a head start).
Tuesday, September 6, 2016
Welcome to Thought and Writing
Hello I'm Mickey Moses, and I am your instructor for ENGL 1050. Welcome to the class, and welcome to our blog. This blog is our class's central hub. Here you can find class recaps, homework assignments, readings, and helpful links.
Our class syllabus is located to the right of this post underneath Class Documents. It lists the rules and expectations for this course. We will read through the entire document in class, but some of the major points you want to remember are....
I'm looking forward to getting to know all of you.
Our class syllabus is located to the right of this post underneath Class Documents. It lists the rules and expectations for this course. We will read through the entire document in class, but some of the major points you want to remember are....
- Come to class everyday. Attendance is important and necessary in order for you to pass this class.
- Complete all your assignments. You cannot get points for work you do not complete.
- Be respectful of me and your classmates.
- Don't cheat.
- Ask questions and participate in class discussions.
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